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Topic：

the of of 讨论曾经很繁荣的Akkad 覆灭原因。

阅读：给出帝国覆灭的三个原因。

1. 征服地区人民频繁反抗、起义，伤了帝国根基。

2. 阅读分论点2-降水少导致农耕受影响，没有充足食物供给( food )。

3. 阅读分论点3-帝国很霸道，总是企图控制贸易(听力中称为 trade)，并且把自己的条件强加给其他国家，引起周边国家不满甚至导致了几十个外国国王对其宣战。举例海战。

听力：阅读三个原因都没有说服力。

1. 征服地区的城墙被征服拆了，起义军没有城墙保护很容易会被政府军镇压。

2. 粮食并不短缺，农耕技术很先进，甚至掌握灌溉技术()，北方缺水能从别的地区引水。并且知道存储粮食(store grain)

3.听力分论点3-海战是真实的，虽然和一些国家会有摩擦托福考试，但战后新的机会和资源都会变多，弥补(make up)损失。

范文：

the of Akkad which once , the puts three . Yet, all of them are by the with the .

Frist, in the ’s point of view, the from the areas the . The , on the other hand, that in the areas, the was torn down, which makes it easy for the army to them they were under no .

When it comes to food being to the on by less , the is in with this point in the . The that they did not food . Their were quite and they even . If the area the lack of water, it could take water from other areas. What’s more, they had the of grain.

The last point by the is that the trade by Akkad on other wars such as naval . This is also by the which that it is true that naval did . But of the with other , Akkad was to more and after the , which could for the .

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